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Rip it, shred it, give me your best critique here. It is improving, but my plot could use some boosting.

Teenage ranchers’ daughter, Cheyanna Ashley, longs to win this season’s high school rodeo finals, barrel-racing. Longtime friend and companion, her horse Rocky, is getting too old to compete at this level. New horses are expensive and hard to find. Countless horses are looked at, each that is ruled out by being too expensive brings relief that she won’t have to part ways with her beloved Rocky. Finally a new horse is brought home; a horse not only with a grandiose ability to run, but also with a grotesque disfigurement. A winning opportunity, finally in her reach, Cheyanna must first confront battles of her heart.

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